Claudia — my quick impression after scanning the article. The title and subtitle are quite long, and don’t include the phrase Energy Management, which seems to be the key concept.

Also the section on Einstein and relativity is a slightly confusing sidetrack that doesn’t really serve to clarify the main premise.

I intend to read the article fully as the ideas are interesting, but these are the things I noticed right away — hope this helps, please treat it as constructive rather than criticism.