hey George, you’re working with a potentially interesting idea here, but you don’t fully develop it, and more importantly, your delivery is quite sexist. Both in the “Irritating Girl” formulation of the title, and the insistence that it is always women who take longer to get ready. I’ve known plenty of guys obsessed with self-grooming with a combination of poor time management skills.

I would rethink your approach to presenting this particular life lession