Joe Váradi 🇭🇺
1 min readSep 17, 2017

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hi Susan, the above is a perfect example where, in my opinion, rewording for clarity is the more elegant solution rather than throwing more punctuation at a thorny sentence:

In the spring of 2013, I was stumbling through the Greater Boston real estate market with my husband, [specify Mark or Bob here]

😎 problem > solved

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Joe Váradi 🇭🇺

Editor of No Crime in Rhymin' | Award-Winning Translator | ..."come for the sarcasm, stay for my soft side"